Audience: 15-20
Purpose: This piece was written to show how simple seeing can be when we close our eyes.
Blessed without eyes
The world is true
Fiction dies
And reality brews
Everything is clear
Everything is real
The superficial disappear
Life is experienced
Music observed
Colours felt
And the ticks of time are heard
Nature buzzes
Cities hum
Sights become sounds
The lost become found
The blind become blessed
Seeing beyond all the rest
Purpose: This piece was written to show how simple seeing can be when we close our eyes.
Blessed without eyes
The world is true
Fiction dies
And reality brews
Everything is clear
Everything is real
The superficial disappear
Life is experienced
Music observed
Colours felt
And the ticks of time are heard
Nature buzzes
Cities hum
Sights become sounds
The lost become found
The blind become blessed
Seeing beyond all the rest
A beautiful poem. I couldn't have put it better myself!
ReplyDeleteThis was very beautiful, I thought that it flowed nicely. It was a great take on the assiment and keep it going!
ReplyDeleteAlso very beautiful. Just kidding. Good rythm and rhymes you gangster rapper you. Your writing is very simple and to concise, I wish to see more in depth analysis in your writing in the near future. :)
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